Critiques (good and bad!) of my short story. Read it and compare your thoughts--there will be spoilers!
February 6, 2023
My short story Desolate 4869 won a Silver Honorable Mention in the Writers of the Future contest. Great! Now let's tear it down and examine what could have morphed it into a First Place winner. Download it and read along with me.
August 16, 2022